My name
                Is reece 
                I got a lot 
                Of mates 
                I'm a very
                Good boy 
                I 
                Like fortnite
                I like the beach 
                And I like
                going fishing
                And I like
                My feet/not
When i play
When i play
                Fortnite 
                I play
                With my
                Mates I have
                One brother 
                And a
                 Mother and 
                 A Dad I 
                Am the
               favorite child 
                All my mates 
               Are my crazy
               cat Casper
               My other lazy old
               Cat lily and my 
               Fat cat binky 
Kia ora I am Hendrix from red hill school, I like the way you put a little bit of a rhyme in your introduction and how you put information about you but not to much like you number and were you live. Next time you should put a little bit more rhyme in it and style like better font.
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