Hello Reece, Your post has been completed. Well done. Next step use punctuation when writing it really helps your reader understand what you have written.
Hi Reece, The first few words you wrote on your blog about Judge and Cane gave me the impression that you did really enjoy the experience. A suggestion for next time is that you use punctuation, full stops and capital letters correctly so it is easier for people who read your blog to understand what you mean.
Hello Reece,
ReplyDeleteYour post has been completed. Well done. Next step use punctuation when writing it really helps your reader understand what you have written.
Hi Reece,
ReplyDeleteThe first few words you wrote on your blog about Judge and Cane gave me the impression that you did really enjoy the experience. A suggestion for next time is that you use punctuation, full stops and capital letters correctly so it is easier for people who read your blog to understand what you mean.
kia ora Reece its Mariah again.I like how you put information on your post about the dog.Next time you should make your post smaller a bit.
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